Barson Pehle-#UrduNazm #Poem #RomanScript

Barson Pehle

Barson Pehle

(maqbara-grave; naqsh-engrave; mahweguftagu- engrossed in dialogue; aashnayi- familiarity; dilrubayi- love and affection)

20 thoughts on “Barson Pehle-#UrduNazm #Poem #RomanScript

  1. Bahut Khoob. Maasha-Alah badhey hi andaaz main teerey nashter chalatey hain aap. Andaazey bayan aap ka dil cheerta hai.

    Yahein kahein hum Aap se miley they kabhi,
    Na jaaney kis moad pey bichad gaye hum kahein,
    Kudrat ki Bairukhi se baikhabar,bikhar gaye hum kis kadar,
    Na tum jaano na hum jaaney.

    God Bless!

  2. Budki Sahib……..!
    Apki is nazm ko par kar
    aisa mahsoos hota he jaise
    kuch dinon ke bad
    Aapki Afsana nigari par
    Aapki nazm nigari
    Ghalib Ajayegi (agar nazm par
    qarare wqa’e multafit rahe)
    goke Aapki pechaan aik afsana
    nigar ki hesiyat se he,magar
    (is nazm ko par kar)
    aisa maloom hotahe jase
    Aapke sene main aik
    Afsana nigar se ziyada
    aik Sha’ir ka Dil Dhraktahe.
    Aapki ye nazm is mozu par
    harfe Aakhir he.
    aisi benazeer nazm pesh
    karne kiliye mubarakbad qabool
    farmayen.Allah kare zore qalam aur ziyada.
    AAMEEN

    • Qasim Bin Zaheer Sahab Yeh aap ki muhabatein hain jo bahut kuch likh gayein Warna to hum apne aap ko is qabil nahi samajhte. Kabhi kabhi dil nazm kehne ke liye beqarar ho jaata hai to likh leta hoon.

  3. Mohtaram budki sahab……….!
    aaj tak maine sirf aapki nasri jaulaainiya’n hi dekhi thi’n, aaj pehli martaba aapki nazm parhi, mozu, technic, usloob, zuban-o-bayan har etbaar se ye 1 shaahkaar nazm hai, ye nazm apne irteqaa se aakhir tak sehar-andaaz bayaniya ki mazhar hai, climex tak aate aate nazm apni daad khud wasool karne ki salaahiyat rakhti hai.
    is behtareen nazm k liye aapki qalmi raf’ato’n ko salaam karta hun.
    …….FIDA

    • Thank you for your appreciation of my Poem. In fact I only pen down my thoughts in poetic form when I find that prose cannot do justice to my specific thoughts.Still however my first love remains prose only.

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